Vice Versa??

Can you read this paragraph and see if it makes sense?


err How can I better it and sound articulate at the same time?





Vampires are mostly seen as mythical creatures that were only created for human entertainment and vice versa. To people like me this a very serious matter. These immortals may actually be living among us. It was believed that baby born with teeth,a bat flying over a corpse, or being the seventh son of the seventh son we as humans should take these facts into consideration for our benefit. Are you aware that there are actually steps one can take to make sure they are not condemned into suffering with the living dead? Follow these few simple steps and you'll be able to save your life and identify a vampire as well.

Vice Versa??
Are you implying also that humans were only created for vampire entertainment? I don't think you want to use "vice versa" there.





"a baby born with teeth"





"....of a (not the) seventh son.." thus is a sentence fragment, you should think of a logical way to end the sentence, put a period, and then Start with, "We as humans...."
Reply:"Vampires are mostly seen as mythical creatures that were only created for human entertainment and vice versa. To people like me it is a more serious matter. These immortals may actually be living among us. It was believed that a baby born with teeth, a bat flying over a corpse, or being the seventh son of the seventh son were indicators of a vampire. We, as humans, should take these ideas into consideration. Are you aware that there are actually steps one can take to make sure they are not condemned into suffering with the living dead? Follow these few simple steps and you'll be able to save your life and identify a vampire as well."



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