What do you think of my poem?

It's from the heart.


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A poem is a thing


That is much great fun


It puts big grinning smiles


On ev-er-y-one!





A poem is a drug


And a really bad disease


You smoke it


And you catch it


And can take it as you please





A poem is a happy


Flower with a stem


It even creates lemons


What will you do then?!





A poem is like a carcass


of a Chinese-dumpster cat


It produces a smell


At the drop of a hat





A poem is quite intelligent


Like a kid without a mom


Whose daddy’s selling crack and weed


And hitting up the bong





A poem is entertaining


And potentially insane


It even has the power


To make hot sauce fall as rain





A poem can create melodies


Of the most melodic sort;


It can make one understand the way


To properly snort


…coke.





A poem is full of love and joy,


And sometimes lemon-lime


Chicken made upon the grill,


And tasting like a rhyme





A poem can eat a horse alive,


And swallow just as much


As a cancerous whale flailing around


And dangerous to touch.





A poem can be a song or not,


Cold a hell and freezing hot


A newborn child that never sleeps;


A knocked-up broom that cannot sweep











A poem is brilliant baby-blue


And vomit-escent orange


It’s red as poison-ivy rash


And nothing rhymes with orange





A poem is like a vampire bat


That feeds on human flesh,


Its teeth are pink with neon blood


And Listerine-fresh





A poem can beat up syphilis


And living roadkill too


Creamy as Bailey’s (fresh and creamy),


Consumed from a shoe





A poem can have its head cut off


At any given time


Can drive a clown to suicide,


Cause murder to a mime.





A poem is polygamous,


screws all with equal measure


Its failure to discriminate


Is a poem’s greatest treasure!





A poem can attend church at will


And still get into Heaven,


Can drive around and pollute the earth,


Has a curfew of eleven.





A poem can be manipulated


Like an illegitimate child


Is banished from society


And made to live in the wild

What do you think of my poem?
Well done


especially like the nothing rhymes with orange part


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Reply:its great
Reply:nice
Reply:HOLY CRAP!! KEEP PUTTING THEM OUT ON ANSWERS MAN! THEY ******** ROCK!!!
Reply:good description of what poetry can be, for those that are critical or wanting to learn how to write and what writing is about. As well as why some people like us like to write.



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