Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Hey, Need Help?

Alright, I'm looking for a tactful way for my vampire (in my story) to kill someone and drink his blood, without the reader figuring out he was a vampire. i've considerd him talking to someone, and they are like "where were you?" and he's like "hunting" and they notice a flack of blood on his lower lip and on his teeth. Good idea or not?

Hey, Need Help?
That's a great idea, you might even mention ruffled hair. What type of novel is it? Well what's the main drama? I'm intrigued already. I'd love to hear more.
Reply:Seems like a good idea.
Reply:that sounds like a good idea


or on his clothes
Reply:Sounds great.
Reply:yep I think you should use that idea it seems really good to me...because the audience may think that he was hunting animals so they won't figure out he is a vampire =).
Reply:not bad....





but just like another vampire in the novel or movie





make something new dude....





like





vampire half human


he got curse


wanna be human


kill for stay alive


run from the big boss vampire





and he have friend


his friend is monkey and that monkey like to do disco dance....tet..tet..treeerrttt tet tet tet papapapapa parapapapa


puru puru puru





hehehehehehehehe


gud luck



mens health

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