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How do I begin? Do I tell you the demise of lost innocent mixed with the bitter tears of a decrepitated soul or do I give a bad beginning with the same ending. I guess, I must make sense first; so I will begin not in the beginning but somewhere in between. I was forced to attend an All Hollows Eve party, of course; it was at my own apartment that my roommate set up. The *****! Anyway, I was there because I had nowhere else to go,(it is my home) and she refused to have the party elsewhere( the pole polisher). I am not bitter towards her, just in awe and ashamed for the both of us. People started to arrive in groups. Not two or threes but 6 to 10. I was not happy! I went up to my roommate and asked her:” did you have to invite every Tom, John, Jim, Susanne, and Pauline that you ****** !” She just grinned and gave me a glass and said “ drink this and shut the **** up”. So, I took it ( like a twat) and drunk it and felt no more….


OF MYSELf!!!!





The horror of the insult or assault that I caused still reign supreme amongst mast murders and serial killers. Who knew that 16ozes of part blood and whiskey could make me do things unholy towards other people. That night my human-self broke and gave birth to a sub-human cannibal ,unforgiving, twisted self-loving demon of pure hatred. I enjoyed every minute. I was enrapture of the pain I caused and orgasmic with their last breath. I bit their tender juicy flash and relished the joy of their screams. The world was right with me for the first time in my life. I was so wrapped up in doing what was right that I forgot what true pleasure was until….


I ripped the foreskin with my teeth and skinned the balls with my perfectly manicured nails. Ohhhhhhhhh…the first is the best. He screamed so deliciously loud that I thought he should taste his own flesh. So I gave him a kiss that left no tongue in his mouth and he produce the most heavenly of sounds that echoes through my wettest of dreams till this day. Happy and content, I sought out another victim because I was not yet fully satisfied with my gift. I wanted more!!!! And more I got.





The sweetest of youth was sucked down my throat while the age of maturity was ripped of flesh and fried with butter and garlic.( Oldness is tough but tasty). No! I did not eat everyone. Only the ones that looked very tasty( about 7 I ate). Then, I spied something ripped, bleeding and screaming. Oh my! What fun to see Lilith at her games. My roommate, with a potato peeler, shredded the skin of a very beautiful, blue-eyed, blond, tanned skinned double-d pretty *****. I watched in an orgasmic bliss and screamed when double-d screamed. What pleasure I felt! How very holy and right I was with the universe. I wanted to undo want nature gave birth too and feast on the flesh of the Gods. . I engorged myself on Lilith’s vileness and watched as she gave birth to a monster who relished every moment of desecration upon the human body. That monster with its foul breath and reeking of rotten flesh decided to join in the games of Mother. So like any good child, I droved right in and began to rip, bite, extract bowels and toast the skin to a nice buttery crispness (no more pork rinds for me). When there was no one else to be had, I thought I would try my roommate, Lilith, my creator to see how she would taste. What a big ******* mistake!! I attempted to sneer her in my claws of blacken death. The ***** moved!! She caught me by throat and *** and said in the sweetest voice I ever heard:


‘I am Lilith . The first before Eve. How dear you turn upon me? I am mother to legions and a gift to humanity. I make and create. No one undoes me! But I will give you something” she leaned into me and kissed me with the foulest breath of life that would have killed all of New York’s cockroaches.


Now, I sit here wrapped tight in white with mind sharp but with a body that festers sores which reeks, seeps, and pours out my gory glorious body which will never end. Like all vampires, I heal. but I have the touch of ghoul in me, marked forever by Lilith.


How I truly love the *****!

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