Sunday, October 11, 2009

How can I continue this story?

I am writing a story and I finished my first chapter but am unable to continue with chapter 2. I would love some ideas if you have any. So basicly my story begins with Sarah on her way to a cabin in the woods for a vacation away from everyone. She wakes in the middle of the night to the brightest moon she has ever seen in the sky and decides to go for a walk in the woods. Then we cut to Kaden, the vampire, waking from his healing rest in the ground. He cannot sense anyone around and so feels it is safe too rise. (He cannot sense Sarah because she is a True Witch but she does noto know) He opens the earth and rises up into the air, dresses as the same time, closes the earth below and floats back down. Sarah walks up and sees him just as he is floating back down and makes a noise. Kaden turns toward her in shock but he has the red eyes and pointed teeth of a vampire ready to feed. Sarah screams and faints...... And so ends my first chapter. I have no idea how to continue it.

How can I continue this story?
the vampire attempts to feed on the blood of Sarah, but is burned by her skin because she is a witch, she discovers that she is a true witch, and becomes acquainted with Kaden, and they search for............
Reply:Then don't because probably having "no idea" is a "good idea" like especially in this case; for the story is total rot, just an honest opinion(but as you know what they say about opinions, everybody has it like everybody has a_____).
Reply:a wounded animal draws his attention, with a deep unbarring scent that draws him towards it. as the girl lies on the floor looking really tasty, the vampire is drawn unwillingly towards the animal.



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