Should i post more stories?

Sara bit her lip as Jake parked at the side of the lake. He smiled at her.


“So you ready?” he asked moving closer to her. Sara stayed covered up in her warm sweater, smiling a little when he kissed her ear slowly. Jake moved his hand to her thigh under that short mini skirt he liked. She was innocent, cute, and easy. He felt her underwear along her cold thigh. He’d warm that up in no time at all.


“Jake…. I told you this was my first time and I don’t know how it all works” she said softly to him. He smiled.


“Don’t be scared I’ll slow it down for you”. She smiled a little.


“Ok….” She said as he unbuttoned his shirt. She felt his hands bring her closer to him as he positioned her on top of him. He kissed her as she pushed him back slowly to kiss down his chest and back up to his neck.


“…Such a shame you’re too small” Sara said sitting up. He looked up at her stupidly as she unzipped his pants. “As I thought to small…. So sorry. I’m picky. We can’t have a little fun,” she pouted at him. She smiled big and Jake realized that her teeth were waiting fangs. He tried to sit up but her hand held him down with ease. She hissed sweetly at him as he wined like a dog from her palm bearing down on his chest cavity.


“Don’t hurt me… please” he begged her. She forced his head to the side as he cried. She kissed his ear.


“Too bad so sad…” she whispered. Jake saw her open her mouth wide before her fangs sank deep into his neck. He closed his eyes as the pain set in. Sarah sucked long and hard…..trying to get every drop of blood from him. He stopped moving as she finished drinking.


That would keep her full for at least a week She went through his pocket and took out everything. Before getting out, she put the car in drive and got. Sara stood calmly, watching the candy-red Cadillac creep over the edge of the cliff; it hit the murky black waters, of the lake below and sank. She smirked as the car disappeared.


Sara was a vampire who got her dinner, posing as a high school student. She looked innocent, sweet and 18. Her only older brother, Victor, helped himself to animals. He didn’t think it was funny when she called him a vegetarian.


Sara lived with Victor but she wanted the good stuff… the human blood. Her cell phone rang. She smirked at her ring tone; it was Maneater. She looked at her red V-Cast Chocolate phone; Victor was calling her. Did she feel like hearing his voice? She answered.


“Hello….big brother” she said sweetly. Victor sighed.


“Where are you?” he asked worried. She laughed.


“On my way home…” The wind blew a bit.


“Why did you avoid my question? Not what I asked” he responded annoyed. He couldn’t see her smirking.


“I’ll be home in a few… love you” she replied making a sappy kissing sound before closing her phone. She walked to the road side and began to head home. There were foot steps behind her as she walked at a comfortable pace. She turned down the road, which was secluded with wooded are on either side of the street. The footsteps continued. Looking over shoulder, there was no one there to greet her waiting burgundy eyes. Maybe the blood was getting to her. The sound of laughter made her think otherwise


Sarah turned around and a pair of lips were against her own. Blake was kissing her with a longing passion as his hands moved under her sweater. Sarah smiled through this kiss.


“You know my brother doesn’t want me around you…” she whispered playfully on his lips, before easing her arms around his neck.


“That’s what makes it so much better” he said kissing her neck slowly. Blake was a part of a rebel vampire league that killed just for kicks… That or they hunted down werewolves fun.

Should i post more stories?
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Reply:KEEP WRITING STORIES ♥
Reply:so what's the question here???
Reply:looks like more long winded poo da
Reply:Weird!! Who would wanna read about a vampire who acts like a prostitute and sucks the guys blood!! Okay??? You should tone it down a bit with your "love stuff"!!!! Gosh!!


You have talent... but this?? Way weird!!! :[


I give it a big thumbs down!!!



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